Sunday, April 25, 2010

My daughter's constellations

Sleeping in her old room,
I discover on the ceiling
a galaxy from her childhood.

I try to make out the celestial system
of glow-in-the-dark stars,
to guess what she was thinking
when she created her own astronomy.

I thought I saw the constellations
of endangered birds and rainforest frogs
she loved when she was nine,

a flute-playing nymph dancing
near the orb of Chinese paper
that forms her sun.

Beyond that, I can't
discern the pictures in her sky.
Her most private planets
are only visible through
a telescope she took with her,
the lens of her own heart.

I have to be content
with this, and only this...
points of light reaching me now
from her distant past.

2 comments:

  1. This is completely wonderful, Caledonia my dear. Heartbreaking and lovely, and such a wonderful use of the mundane - the ceiling and its stars, the paper lantern sun - turned into an entire history, a young life.

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  2. Thought of this poem looking at those very constellations on the ceiling above us, as we slept in this bedroom last week.

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